Tears

by Mark   May 4, 2006


Tears of sorrow,
Tears of joy,
Tears of tomorow,
Tears to enjoy.

Tears of life,
Tears that're sad,
Tears dropping on a knife,
Tears that are mad.

Tears running down,
Tears dripping on the floor,
Tears on a frown,
Tears on the door.

Tears of love,
Tears of hate,
Tears from above,
They are tears of fate.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    This poem would've been better if you didn't use tear at the beginning of every line except the last one. It's an excellent concept and well written but try not to over emphasize the point.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    I liked it!! I thought it had a lot of emotion in it!!! Wasnt one of the best poems i have read, but still very well written!!! Great Job!!! Everything rhymed great!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    "Tears of joy"
    that was a really powerful line
    i really think that its more painful crying for joyful reasons than for hurtful reasons.
    very well written poem
    5/5
    my poem: UNTOLD SECRETS!!
    TY

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Alright, good concept but I would like to make a few suggestions. You can take them or not, it's really up to you:
    Tears dropping on a knife
    ^Maybe take out the a before knife.
    Tears dripping on the floor
    ^Maybe take out the "the"
    They are tears of fate
    ^maybe "tears of fate."

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw this is sad too =[ Cheer up Marky Boi :P Haha ima call you that now! But uhuhummmm.. This was really sad.. Tears arn't a good thing =[ 5/5

    `natalie xx

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