Aw this is sad too =[ Cheer up Marky Boi :P Haha ima call you that now! But uhuhummmm.. This was really sad.. Tears arn't a good thing =[ 5/5

`natalie xx

Alright, good concept but I would like to make a few suggestions. You can take them or not, it's really up to you:
Tears dropping on a knife
^Maybe take out the a before knife.
Tears dripping on the floor
^Maybe take out the "the"
They are tears of fate
^maybe "tears of fate."

"Tears of joy"
that was a really powerful line
i really think that its more painful crying for joyful reasons than for hurtful reasons.
very well written poem
5/5
my poem: UNTOLD SECRETS!!
TY

I liked it!! I thought it had a lot of emotion in it!!! Wasnt one of the best poems i have read, but still very well written!!! Great Job!!! Everything rhymed great!!! 5/5

This poem would've been better if you didn't use tear at the beginning of every line except the last one. It's an excellent concept and well written but try not to over emphasize the point.