by FrozenTearsBleed May 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Though time has marked me with its knife, |
Has alot of potential, would do better if you gave more thought to the last stanza. again, might wanna fix the spelling of "feel" |
That's really good. A few parts are a little cofusing because of grammar. But it's still good! *thumbs up* |