by Corruption May 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Her eyes are like the stars in the night |
This poem is so sweet, but in all honesty...i don't think the eding as any sense of closure, like, after the last line, you could put something like..."and i know, she is all i need in this world." you don't have to use tht, but if you added just somehing to end it, it would be way better that it already is. but i think it is a really lovely poem. good job! |
Awww thats sooo sweet! check out some of mine please. 5/5 |
by stephanie
WOW i like this poem lol i just met you in the chat room |
I like it, its so sweet! |