Hey Meggie i loved ur poem. I can relate very well 2 it. B/c my dad is the same way and i ended 2 or 3 yrs ago with him. Your great at writting so keep doing it. If u want to u can come visit some of mine.

Love Lauren

This has to be one of the best poems you have written. I really did enjoy this one. This is what I am talking about controlled emotions. You didn't go off on a rant, you kept them to yourself, and you wrote this very well. It's sad and passionate at the same time. A wonderful story, and believe me when I say, this poem has touched my heart. Amazing stuff.