Wowwwwwwwwww..really nice.i liked the words and the whole poem is very good..5/5..wish ya all da best..

Wow that is like a perfect way to explain it! 5/5 lol

Really really good poem!

AWESOME!!!!!!!

This poem is almost like one that you cna hear the writer saying it as you read. its filled with many inner thoughts and feelings. i really enjoyed your work! although it saddens me to see someone with such low self-esteem but i guess thats something all of us need to work on.
take care, sarah

Aw that is so sad. It's a really good poem though.. very heart felt & full of emotion. Great job on this.

I know exactly what you mean
but my life is kind of different
many people are fascinated by my beauty
but they dont know what sacrifices i had to do to have the beauty they see
and they dont have any idea what lies behind this mask of lies

Its good, really nice rhyming

Awsome Poem - I loved it 5/5

Beauty comes from the inside out, work it that way.