Untold Secrets

by melly xx   May 4, 2006


The secret she hides
so deep inside
impossible to let out
the deception of feelings
lost in her head
the screaming never stops
the words untold
never spoken of
stuck inside
beating her down
her silent voice
begging to be heard
it's the secrets inside
the words that
have kept quiet for too long
that kill her
and bring her back
each day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    That is another nice peace of work i loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Begging to be heard
    it's the secrets inside
    the words that
    have kept quiet for too long
    I liked this part the most out of the whole poem but overall it was really good work. ~red

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    The end of this poem is what saved it. Great last couple of lines!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey wonderful poem, i specially like this bit,
    begging to be heard
    it's the secrets inside
    the words that
    have kept quiet for too long
    that kill her

    that bit jut jump out at me uno?
    keep up your fab work mel

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