Hey wonderful poem, i specially like this bit,
begging to be heard
it's the secrets inside
the words that
have kept quiet for too long
that kill her

that bit jut jump out at me uno?
keep up your fab work mel

The end of this poem is what saved it. Great last couple of lines!!!

Begging to be heard
it's the secrets inside
the words that
have kept quiet for too long
I liked this part the most out of the whole poem but overall it was really good work. ~red

That is another nice peace of work i loved it!