Those words

Aww hunny. It doesn't matter what people say. Especially one that you feel the need to change for. If he doesn't like the way you are, then he can't respect you for who you are. =)

[because its his cursed words
that poison her with hatred]
^^My favourite lines. ^_^ They just jumped out to me. I liked the description and emotion that was wrapped into these 2 lines. Very well done.

The flow was good, and the imagery was excellent. I could really see what you were talking about. But, although it was very well written with lots of emotion, I felt it was a little cliche. With all the cutting stuff. People are always saying they're going to write something in their arms. I just thought that idea in this piece was cliche. Other than that, very good write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is a very good poem

love the creativity on this one!!!

keep it up!

Yet again, interesting style. You might want to try to structure your poetry in stanzas and try to make some of them rhyme!!!

REALLY GOOD!!!! luved it!! keep writing!

I thought it was very good!