Wow! Such a powerful poem! I hope you don't really feel this way...I'm a friend if you ever want to talk. Just email me. So sad, but an excellent poem.

S touching Sarah! i wish u r not going thru this.....
nice job

luv
Bharti

Thanks for commenting on my poem first of all. Second of all, life does blow sometimes doesn't it? Stay strong... I liked this poem ^_^ It was short hahaha :P Take it easy ^_~

Wow, loved ur poem, n thanks for commenting on mine. how ironic it is.... my name is sarah as well ^.^
well hope to hear more poems 4rm u as great as the last.

XxSarahxX

Beautiful write and i hope that it only stays here on papers and not in reality as u hv the gift of releasing ur pain through words...so get the best out of that gift and stay strong

all the best and take care
5/5

Wonderful poem. You're a talented poet, very good at expressing your pain in your words. I just hope this didn't really happen.

Omgg.. datz so sad, but so good! keep up the excellent writing!
jessy

WOW it is such a sad poem

Wow. Just, wow. The way it's written makes you read it slowly making the words even more melancholy.
I've wished to just not wake up so many times.
Really, truly good.

xxx

HEY Sarah! r u ok dear?
that was so touching. really made me cry........hold on dear! take care and
b happy

luv

Thats pretty. **tear** keep up the good work and thanxz for da comment on my new poem :)

much love, Tonya