She cries

by ShaunaMarie   May 4, 2006


There she goes right through these halls,
The one wholl surely fall,
She walks around all cloaked in black,
She hates whats become but she cant go back,
Her families decision has twisted her soul,
Its broken all thats there,
She cries in the corner at night; home alone,
But of course dad doesnt care,
Shes broken and twisted and she hates him too,
She cries and she cries, and thats all she can do,
Shes angry and shes full of rage, and for all that he knows she lied,
but all of that doesnt matter now, She couldnt take it and she died...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    It's a good poem, but you might wanna check out some of the rhyming. It's not really balanced.

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Wow this is so strong
    i really enjoyed reading it

    well done...5/5

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  • 18 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    Very good, 5/5.