I love the way you've started it, it is great and I think you should add more thou but I love it so far

That was beautiful. Absolutely stunning. I actually had to go back and check your profile 'cause I thought maybe I'd misread your age...I didn't. You are obviously an amazingly talented writer and I loved every line of this poem. I could try and quote my favourite stanza or line but I'd end up copying the whole thing. Truely magnificent stuff. The rhyme, the rhythm the use of language was just stunning 5/5 x

It was very good! I loved how vivid and descrpitive it was. The flow was very good. You are very talented! 5/5

Wow hun, your definately have a way with words. Your use of your extensive vocabulary was incredable, and really made the poem for me. It is nice to read poems that really have depth in their words and discriptions in addition to a powerful message.

-Tainted

Amazing poem, I love the wide range of vocabulary and I just love this write ingeneral!

Shit
thats is sooo sooo soooooo
AWESOME
u have an excellent vocabulary
im totally jelous
5/5
xoxoxo
mary

This poem left me speechless, whixh is pretty hard to do. Bravo!! 5/5