by Melanie lenae May 4, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
He came when we weren't even born, |
Wow... i really need to here that. i need help getting him back into my life though... i have been messing up lately. and i started blameing him for everything... and now i need him... |
by Sourav
I really liked the theme. And the way you've written it! Nice job! |
A wonderfully inspirational poem...very well written and you managed to use a decent rhyming scheme throughout. Watch out for some funny characters at the start. Powerful words... |