by physco May 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
See these scars and cuts? |
by TillyMariex
Wow |
by Jaime
Sad, I hope this is something of that past for you. The poem was structured rather nicely, and the emphasis on the first stanza added nicely to the feeling behind it. Just watch your spelling, "secret" has no "e" on the end, and "week" should be "weak" in the sense that you used it. Take care. |