The girl in my room

by looshluvstuna   May 4, 2006


Theres a girl in my room who is bleeding
theres a girl in my room who is pleading
shes pleading me to read her note
she handed me this note ,herself she said she wrote

there was a girl in my room this evening
the girl in my room was pleadingshe pleaded me until i read
while i read she lay and bled

i read the top line and started to cry
then curled up and screamed y oh y
that girl was desdend to dye
with on tear droplet in her eye

my parents never read my note
the note that i had wrote.

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  • 18 years ago

    by k

    O

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    Youre a good poet and should keep writing! take care
    MUCH LOVE
    XximnotdeadxX

  • 18 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    Great poem nicely written!

    ~Katie