I really liked it! I liked how it flowed and rhymed! Very good! 5/5!

Oh Hayley, this brought tears to my eyes...so heartbreaking.
I admire the strength it takes to write something like this, it's eye opening and the world would be a better place if everyone took the time to show tolerance and embrace everyone no matter what.
I adore this stanza:

"When I try to express my emotions,
it comes out in a chaotic mess,
the message gets lost along the way,
which just adds to my stress."

So well written! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow. i like how you made it universal.