Very nicely written. I can totally relate to how rumors hurt reputations. 5/5. Great Job!

I like all the words and the flow of the poem

but i couldnt quite get the message u were trying to say

I think the fact that your only punctuation was that one question mark felt out of place. I didn't get your message until the final line. I know that rumors are bad and your metaphors for that were on okay. The flow was alright as well.

I really like it....i liked how it flowed. Very good! 5/5!

Very good metaphor use, the poem is really awesome, you did well to sum up the snow-balling effects of a rumour. Great x

Really nice job on this one! loved it! It really gives such a fitting feeling!

I certainly know exactly how you feel in this write, I especially found the last three stanzas to be the most powerful and I greatly enjoyed reading it. I particularly loved the metaphor of a river of lies, brilliant stuff. 5/5 x

"thruth is not always popular but it's always right" this so marvellous penned myfriend, simply yet wonderful poem, what else i can say, beautiful done! have a great day, take care.

bert.

It was great. The fourth stabza lost it's rhyme - if it was lyrics for a song, says and ends could rhyme but in poetry - it's hard to force them. However, the rest of the poem was great - I thought the meaning was excellently hidden at the start - and gradually brought itself forwards. Nicely written.

Peace. [Sole]

I liked the topic..Well thought out I have to say!
The flow went a bit weird but it all read well!
I enjoyed it, twas a good read!
x

Really great work
good flow and really nice job with comparing lies to river

good poem

Great write! The use of metaphor was perfect. Flow and structure was great. Keep up the great work! Keep writing. 5/5

Amazing poem. i like the description, and i know how this is; rumors are so pointless... ugh. anyways, great job. 5/5

I can relate..this was a very nice poem to read...amazing!...5/5!
~*Linz*~

That was an amazing poem...it was so true in life...great job...nice word choice..
Emma 5/5

Theres so much truth to your poem- rumors hurt- rumors kill- and the poem sends a powerful message

Wow.. that was just so powerful.. and so sad.. im sure everyone has had rumors spread about them at one point in their lives.. keep up the excellent work!

Wow, gr8 poem, lots of detail! anyway, congrats on gettin runner up on my contest, u were gr8. 5/5

5/5
this is superb
deserves a standing ovation
wow
breath taking
you kept the same strength and pull throughout
wow
love it
5/5
~eMMA