Money

by Meggie33   May 4, 2006


Money isn't looks, and money isn't charm,
you dont need to have money, although it doesnt harm.

pretty girls dont need money they just use it because they can,
honey you don't need no money just to get a man.

Dont glitz up your face, don't buy designer clothes,
You could meet your man while your in pajamas - who really knows?

Dont think your ugly, because honey your not,
just dont worry about what the pretty girl thought.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, strong with a good rhythum and flow. though i agree with Darien about maybe trying a different structure.

    this peice flows well thoughout and the content is well put together, however, the last line seems to lack the power and energy of the rest of the pece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really think you need to try forming your poems into stanzas or verses. The two lines get a bit boring after reading them over and over. I say, try something new?..

  • 18 years ago

    by *Danielle*

    I like it i think all girls need to hear it!

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