by Wasted Fake Smiles May 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Never knew I could feel like this, |
by Ariana
After reading a number of your works I'm glad to finally have stumbled over a happier piece! This poem is very fluid and controlled and I liked how it was sweet and sentimental without sounding over the top or too mushy! I also thought the first line was really nice and a good intro into the poem and the second line (& rhyme) also reinforces this. Very nice write :) |