Unspoken Suicide

by Raychil   May 4, 2006


Her beauty was far
She did everything with grace
Many would stare
At her elegant face

She had it all
Or so it would seem
Friends, beauty, a boyfriend to call
However, something shattered her dream

One day they found her
Lying on the floor
Their eyes went to blur
At the blood that she bore

The reasons for this, were hidden when she died
It was sealed away in an unspoken suicide..

* hey, this is another English thing. I was trying to figure out which one was better. And sorry if you don't like them, but its hard to write when your assigned a stanza, especially one you're not used to lol, well tell me what you think *

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  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    This is a really good poem, it is so touching and you can see the raw emotion in it, that is a very talented skill to have, keep up the good work and if you could please comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I liked it alot.. Great job. I hate when you are told what to write and how. I just write from the inside. But it was awsome. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MaGs

    Hey thanks for the advise i needed it!! and this poem is AWSOME!!! i luv it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    I liked it, very good and well written

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