With out you, How do I survive?

by Green M&M   May 4, 2006


You left me here with out so much as goodbye,
but you took my heart and I don't know why,
you told me you loved me and then you took it back,
inside me I know theres something I lack,

was it really you or was it me,
how could you leave me how could this be,
you promised me forever but gave me little time,
so I'm writing you this poem with every line that rhymes,

we'd talk on the phone for hours on end,
you'd write me letters until there was nothing more to send,
why did you have to walk away from everything we had,
was it something I said or did I make you mad,

I can't live without you because Without you, how do I survive?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    I loved this poem, the words fit wonderfully. It could use some more commas in it though. Commas not only seperate a line in a poem, it also gives the poem pausing areas and seperates questions. For instance, with this line:

    how could you leave me how could this be,

    It could be so much better:

    How could you leave me, how could this be,

    See the difference?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    It's something I can relate to.
    I thought it flowed very well and even though it was so sad, it was a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwwwwwwwwww so sad!! =[ this is a really good poem...i love it! great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donnyelle fenton

    I love your poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Great poem, it was filled with lots of emotion, I really likes it.

    --Steph

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