I really enjoyed this poem! I can relate to it a lot! You are very talented. Great job! 5/5

I loved this! it's desperately sad, the rhymes all work so well and it flows awesomely. It's easy to read but the subject matter is heart-breaking, I suppose that was the intention. Keep on writing and stay strong xxx

I really liked this poem and i can totally relate you could probably tell if u read my poems...keep writing 5/5 good job

Nice poem

It was pretty good. Had a good flow and everything, except at the end it seemed like you were in a hurry. And it seems like it's just not completly finished.

Great poem, it was filled with lots of emotion, I really likes it.

--Steph

I love your poem 5/5

Awwwwwwwwwwww so sad!! =[ this is a really good poem...i love it! great job! 5/5

I loved this.
It's something I can relate to.
I thought it flowed very well and even though it was so sad, it was a pleasure to read.

I loved this poem, the words fit wonderfully. It could use some more commas in it though. Commas not only seperate a line in a poem, it also gives the poem pausing areas and seperates questions. For instance, with this line:

how could you leave me how could this be,

It could be so much better:

How could you leave me, how could this be,

See the difference?