by GR33N3Y3DB3AUTY May 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Always keep your guard up |
by Kaylee
Could have been more poetic and detailed, as in using methaphors or similies or personifacation to reenforce your message which was good as it was. |
I LOVE THE MESSAGE |
by Stabbylou
I meant to say good read. I suck *blushes* |
by Stabbylou
Agreed, but it still has it's own charm. Nice idea for a poem, you really made your point and it's a good so rock on x |
I really liked it even though i prefer rhyminy poems! 5/5 |