I really liked it even though i prefer rhyminy poems! 5/5

Agreed, but it still has it's own charm. Nice idea for a poem, you really made your point and it's a good so rock on x

I meant to say good read. I suck *blushes*

I LOVE THE MESSAGE

Could have been more poetic and detailed, as in using methaphors or similies or personifacation to reenforce your message which was good as it was.