This is a very good poem! Very emotional! You seem to love your friend very much! I liked how the poem flowed. Keep up the good work!

A really pleasant write. You obviously have a very special friendship! The feelings you have for them come across really strongly in this poem. The use of rhyme gives a really consistant and flowing feel, loved every line. Great stuff 5/5 x

This is really good. It's very sweet & descriptive & the flow on it was really good. It had alot of emotion behind it. Great job! 5/5**

Wow... nicly done. I love the sense of reality and sincerity I feel in the words. The flow and rhyme was great. Keep up the good work. 5/5