by Sarah Ann May 5, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
-When reading this poem you will notice some words or lines are fully typed in caps lock. This I done purposely only to emphasize that there are two speakers in this poem. On paper, with two different colored inks it would be more sufficient; but this was the only resort, just to make it easier for the reader to distinguish between the two.- |
I really liked the idea of this poem, it was well done. I understand the point you're trying to make, i seriously battle with myself like that all the time. It was well done, your rhyming is perfect with excellent rhythm, well done. Im reading alot of your poetry, and you are very talented. I like what you write about |
by Spanish Star
I just loved this poem. Really beautiful written. I can so relate to the topic of the poem as well, as I am going threw something of the same right now. But anyhow. The hole poem was great, and I ecpecially loved the part: |
by Nee
Battles from Inside??? well, I'm already into this =( so I guess I know how it feels and I can so relate to your poem!!! |
by Just Sierra
Girl...you have got to be my FAVORITE poet on this site. Your poetry is always so CREATIVE...and I used to have that edge, but now my brain's just gone dead... |