Girl...you have got to be my FAVORITE poet on this site. Your poetry is always so CREATIVE...and I used to have that edge, but now my brain's just gone dead...

I loved it. I understood it the first time around...honestly, it was FANTASTIC!!!

Amazing job!!! xoxoxox 10000000000/5

Battles from Inside??? well, I'm already into this =( so I guess I know how it feels and I can so relate to your poem!!!
firstly thanx for your sweet coments, meant alot to me..yours also make up my day and I luve reading them =)
second:: the idea of this poem was inspiring, heartfelt(for me), wonderful and meaningful!
probably bcuz I've never read such poem! so Yeah it deserved a 5 ^.^
keep it up hun
stay it touch
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

I just loved this poem. Really beautiful written. I can so relate to the topic of the poem as well, as I am going threw something of the same right now. But anyhow. The hole poem was great, and I ecpecially loved the part:

She nodded to me in darkness
And quivered down in fright,
"I can`t believe I doubtet you
When I know you`re always right."

That part gave me chills. Keep it up;)

I really liked the idea of this poem, it was well done. I understand the point you're trying to make, i seriously battle with myself like that all the time. It was well done, your rhyming is perfect with excellent rhythm, well done. Im reading alot of your poetry, and you are very talented. I like what you write about
*keep smiling*
katie