Staring at a bullet

by poetikjustice   May 5, 2006


Staring at a bullet
contemplating should i pull it
thinking of the past
i wonder why I'll do it

I'm eager to pull the trigger
why is life so bitter
thinking of the past
the choice of the bullet gets bigger

should i end it
should i pretend it
I'm lost in a path
with suicidal intentions

I'm looking in the mirror staring at pain
cursing yelling his name in vain
am i to blame
no answer so my choice wont change

staring at a bullet
contemplating should i pull it
click click blow
I'm staring at a bullet

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bran

    Hey. That was pretty much the best poem that i have like ever read. Loved it hunnies. Check out some of my stuff if you want. xoxo bran*

  • 18 years ago

    by poetikjustice

    Thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    That was so touching, that was an excellent poem and im sure many people would agree, you have a real talent for expressing your emotions, if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

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