Yea day dreams are awesome! expecially wen ur bored outta ur mind.:-p gr8 work yet again. 5/5 u use good wordin.

Wow, you really have a talent for writting beautiful poems. This was very well written, it put a beautiful image in my mind, great work.

--Steph

Beautiful. Loved the lovely light and airy quality this poem had which matched the theme so well. Perfection.

You'RE A GOOD WRITER

Good flow. exelent structure.. great work :)

I really enjoyed it, 5/5