A path to silence

by White Blizzard   May 5, 2006


A major loss I carry through the dark path,
Together with you is all I needed to feel free.
We had our dreams and love already planned,
You took my life and pulled it like loose lace.

Commitment you didn't want in the end?
Well, this good soul you threw around the bend.
I hope you feel this pain one day,
When you comeback to me I'll have nothing to say.

You're heading for trouble,
And when you think of how good you had it, your pain and doubt will double.
You killed the best thing in your life,
I condemn you to hell for all my painful nights.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    This poem is very touchy n sad n ful of emotions..i like it

    good luck

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    This poem is excellent! definantly a 5/5. it shows real emotion and i love it!! keep up the fight of life
    ttyl
    Raychel

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