Awww this sounded really sad.....and i love the end abou the daddy its reaaaaaaaaly sweet =]
i love it

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Hey great poem, keep them cuming mel

Your poem is soooooo good. sorry i am just now commenting them, i said i would like weeks ago. i have had those same feelings before, i just wonder if my daddy would be at the bottom waiting for me. keep the good poems coming.

Koala Bear

Your poem is soooooo good. sorry i am just now commenting them, i said i would like weeks ago. i have had those same feelings before, i just wonder if my daddy would be at the bottom waiting for me. keep the good poems coming.

Koala Bear

Sorry i hit submit twice. lol oh well.

Aww! I am close to my dad, so I loved this poem!

Thankies for the other comment to. I feel loved! *hugs*

xoxoxo
Lolli.xx

That is so cute! i love the part about daddy's arms if u didn't read the title it would completely shock you....its really sweet....def keep up the good work! if u could comment on my poems id appreciate it
andi

This is really cute . I love the ending (:
It`s sweet .
Keep it up .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Omg! what can i saw besides, "Awww!" it's so sad... but in a happy way. great job i really liked it! 5/5

Hey. Firstly,the title itself has inspired me for some more poems for me to try to write myself. I've always had a great relationship with my dad, so this poem had caught my eye pretty quickly. I really liked it. I've read it in a pretty disturbed area, as everyone is being loud and reading poetry quietly really doesn't give it the emphasis poetry needs; but even through all that it still sounded quite good to me. I liked the way you ended it, as it showed how much your Dad loves you and how much you love him back. It's really quite sweet. Good job :)

Hi,

I really liked this poem, especially if your only 13. I'm glad you really liked my poem, I realize it's pretty short but I hadn't been getting any inpriation and I'm still not getting any inpiration. I hope you keep up and keep writing, it helps a lot.

-Corey

Beautiful darling. keep writing and never give up hope!

~OnTheRunFromLove~

I love this! u r a good writer! this is the probably the best poem i've read since i started reading poems on here! i luv this one!

This is a kick ass poem i like it

Wow that was really powerful. I loved it so much.

Great poem.

Wow this is a GREAT poem... i am very close to my Father maybe this is why i like this poem so much great job I'm gonna take a look at some more of your work 5/5 here :)

Noelle

Verry sad and good!