Wow. Amazing. It flowed smoothly and there wasn't one line in there I didn't like. It was well-expressed. Keep Writing!

Really loved your use of imagery in this poem, really gives the poem such a strong feeling of desolation...great stuff. Flowed just beautifully, I really enjoyed reading this one, 5/5 x

Wow.. you certainly have a way with words because this is amazing. Flow and rhythm are perfect. Also myself normally writting many stanzas in a poem commend you on how you say so much in little words.. awesome job!!! =)

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This was good. I loved the first stanza, That really brought it out, Made me want to keep on reading. And the ending was good also. Overall it was a top job! Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

Excellent poem, It flowed very good, and it was great to read.

That was a very good poem.. it flowed nicely and it was full of emotion! keep it up!
jessy

Gr8 work, loveed it. so much emotion and details. wow. 5/5 for sure
~*Who Cares?*~

Very nice poem. I really liked the descriptive words you used. Very powerful adjectives,, giving the reader a more vivid image. I also liked how you ended with a paradox, very nice touch.

Great great great wonderful poem! I loved the thought and flow of it! It was how you say....magnicicent!

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