X Loveless Lies

by Sole   May 5, 2006


Tearful, watching you leave
You left me, alone at the end
I find it hard to believe
That you were once my friend

Hanging, cutting and hate
Falling, forever alone
Perhaps it's the path of fate
But your choice is not set in stone

Years down the road, and still
I wait for you, for your return
Missing you, too much time to kill
But I'm not your only concern

Shallow, emotionless tears
Fall from my saddened eyes
As every one of my fears
Is confirmed by your loveless lies

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  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Emotional and heartfelt. Good write. Keep writing... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mich

    You really brought your feelings out and your view on this friendship... Hope all works out!
    Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Sole --
    Not bad! For starters, I really liked how you rhymed line 1 with 3, but still rhymed 2 with 4. It added a nice twist, in which most people fail to include in their poetry. I think that you as a person are a true poet, and keep up your great work.

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Awesome poem very short and sweet! The flow was even better on this one it was not forced upon at all it was great!

    Please r/r/c foriegner and here i am

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    You write so well! To be honest, it's a wonderful poem!

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