Okay Brad, I promise not to hate you. It certainly was a twist and it got me at first, so yes I was going to give you a piece of my mind, but after reading your commentary I forgive you. You're right. There are people like that. I'm glad you're not one. It's is a great poem though, all thoughts of racism or anything aside. Excellent!

Wow, powerful write! Such a sad truth, very well written...

It was powerful....Yes there are people like that still...Very good for the twist. A very great poem that shows some of the ways that some people still think.
~Fallen

I love twists, there so unexpected and actually make you realise something, or at least make you think.
Good write, thank you for your comment and adding me to oyur favs.

Im returning the favour, not because you added me but because I've found another of the few very talented poets.
And I hope to learn something off your work.
MAny thanks,
~Emma