So beautiful and heartfelt... Nice flow and a nice choice of words, really great!

This poem is fantastic, really emotional piece, I love the way you have worded it,and it flows perfectly,
keep writing and take care hun def got my 5 vote sarah x

Thats a really beautiful poem, it flowed very smoothly and shows how devoted u are to this person..they must mean a lot :),
take care,
xxEmmaxx

That was touching, I am glad you can feel and write about a love that is that powerful. Love is one of the strongest human emotions and really can move the world. Your poem was a sweet insight into that.

-Tainted

Wow! So beautifully written. Written straight from the heart :)

Hey darl beautifully w0rded. this was really g0od a heartfelt piece. g0od j0b. thank u haz f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Your poem meant something to me..I can relate to it also!
its so amazingly written and heartfelt!
keep it up
best Of Luck
Yours
NemO
x0x0x0x0x

Hiyu cuddles ... this is a great peice of writing hun! .... cant wait for your next poem!

All the best
Daveyboy.xx

You wanna est your passion keeps the one you love away , then you will know how much you do love him. a very touching poem that made my heart beated at once.

all the best

Great!

I absolutely adore this poem. I'm sure everyone has gone through this phase atleast once in their lives. An ultimate piece Cuddles. I can really feel the emotion you portrayed here. Excellent work!!! Sorry for the late comment.

Love
Michelle

Wow, nice poem

Aw that poem is really sweet. Great job on this!

Beautiful, truly beautiful. keep it up!
-xXx-

That poem was awsome - It explains alot and even right now i pray mine to whom i hope will come back realli come baq to me - 5/5

That Is a Bitter Sweet Poem, Its Sad Yet It Has An Ora Of Sweetness, Its Hard To Explain But You Get My Drift lol It Was Simply Marvelous 5/5? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
-Keep Poetry Alive-

Mary!! You are soo good at writting!! I want your talent!! 5/5

Cuddles your heart seem like an gold precius than that your love means forever good work ever

Awww, this is sooo sweet!

Hey, this is really cute...i can tell you really love him...hopefully everythign works out as you planned...great job..keep it up! I can relate
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy