by Crystallovesmatt May 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
When it first started, |
This is a cute poem. Although, the flow is a bit rocky and there were grammatical errors. Maybe if u fixed it, it would look good. 4/5 |
Aww, sweet :) well written. good job 5/5 XD |
by Dark Secrets
Wow ... *applause* ... that was great, there r lots of people who have that effect ... especially when they've made a bad first impression |
by Katie
I can also relate to this one. I love the emotion in it. Keep it up. =] |
Since u aint got nobody to comment i will do it for u |