Wow. You can write. I wanted to cry because of that poem. The poem is so true about my life too. It's the hurt in the past that makes you hurt in the present. But the present is a gift so why is it so much hurt.. I Dont get it but, I love this poem.

Love
Kesha

-int he future? might want to fix that.
change-its not because- to this isn't because. it might flow better.
-cant be,- to can not be.-you needed another sylible.
-just know if i hurt you- to just know that if i hurt you/

You also might want to capitalize your i's just a thought.-
-just to let you know all of these corrections are what i think and you don't need to listen to them.
you remind me of the author who wrote "Courage" a famous poem.
she was critsized and laughed at for writing about peoples' fears but she her poetry is really deep and it makes you really think.

anyway goos luck with your poetry and if you read any of mine i hope you injoy them if not thank you.
5/5
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

I wish i had read this a few months ago, it would have helped my relationship! lol I seriously loved it.!!

First off, just a heads up, in the first stanza, third line, i think there was a little typo. Anyways, this one was great. Not as strong as the other ones you wrote, but still very great. I loved it. I can relate that feeling of self-disgust and the fear of hurting someone you love. It made me think the whole time. Excellent job! [: 4.8/5 but I'll round it up to 5. [: