Very sweet and romantic. Kudos. >.

Wow I like this, its different, but good. The dream seems like the vry thing most of us spend our lives searching for, freedom and love. Or maybe thats just me. it's a vrry good poem, keep it up.please read some of my poems, thnxs. God bless you.

always ur friend
Lissa

Aww.. nice poem! itz rilly sweet.. keep up the gr8 work!
jessy

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Keep writing.

Very good!