Ana I'll Love You

by lonelynow   May 5, 2006


Her arms are light upon my shoulders
Her body keeps me warm
But her hands are forceful
And her eyes contain a storm

She tells me that I'm ugly
She tells me that I'm fat
Fusses and sighs over my fat thighs
Pokes me and says "look at that"

But she makes me feel superior
As I watch other girls eat
Can't stand to see all that food
My face white as a sheet

She keeps me apart form all my friends
I can never be like they are
Never catch a movie and a pizza
When any bite could be a bite too far

But I don't need any other friends
We're quite happy here in my head
I don't need to laugh or giggle or chat
When I can count calories and bones instead

She pushes me forward
Through all this mess
Tells me that I'm ugly
So I achieve success

Helps me through this life
This life full of pain
When I betray her friendship
I long to see her again

She helps loads of people
I hope she'll help me too
Give me your guidance
And Ana I'll love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    I dunno, borderline 4/5 but I gave you the 5 cause the emotion you could feel. A few spelling errors and just sentences that didnt make sense. Like

    Fusses and thighs over my fat thighs

    I dont really know if you can use "thighs" as an action, but it makes the reader stop and make sure they didnt read sme thing wrong. But alas still about a 5, probably near a 4.5 or 4.7 But it'll get there.

    YOurs Truly
    Bryce

  • 18 years ago

    by Fall X Child

    Wow this is beautiful. i hate ana but i love her at the same time. she makes me physically weaker but strong ya know? keep writing you have lots of talent!

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