Comments : Returning traded hearts

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerrys¤baby¤girl

    Hey!!! thats really good!!! keep on writing you have real talent!! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by ari

    This is really good, but there is one point I want to clarify: is the perosn in your poem scared he/she might break the heart she is sheltering, or is she/he scared that hers will be broken too?