Sitting on bed waiting to die

A girl sits on top of her bed holding onto her teddy bear as tight as she can she looks out of her windows and looks at the pouring rain she has so many things running in her mind things of confusing things of love and hate the more she thinks the worse she feels she tries to talk her self into thinking every thing is fine but she knows her life is freakd up the girl gets up and walks to her bathroom locks the door and sits on the toilet set and holds onto her teddy bear for dear life their are so many things rushing in her mind she don't know what to do except grab her shaver out of the tub and take the razors out at first she just sits their and stares at her wrist then the blades she picks up one of the sharp pieces of metal an holds it up to her wrist the next thing she know shes jamming the blade into her wrist and starts to outline her vines theirs blood every were dripping out of her arms all over the floor she drops the razor on the floor she starts thinking about what she just did she says to her self \\\"i know this is the end of my pain\\\" she tries two stand up but she just falls right back down on the floor she gives up on trying to get out of the bathroom and save her self so she just crawls on the floor and hugs her blood stained teddy bear she is starting to get cold and she cant heel her body and with her last breaths she screams for her mom and says shes sorry her mom rushes to her bath room and knocks on the door but she doesn\\\'t here any voices her mom freaks out and gets a knife to unlock the door when she opens the door she sees blood all over the floor and sees her lifeless child on the floor she turns the lifeless girl around so i can see her face i brake down in tears as i looked in to my on lifeless face

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