Comments : Sitting on bed waiting to die

  • 18 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    Yes that sound sad but I have see it happen to many time to too many of my friends...................And yes that is a true poem about me and JT he is my son my life my baby My savor he keeps me from dieing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    This is really good. i liked it. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    Yes I do why may I ask!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxHellsGirlxx

    Hey i love your stuff. I have a yahoo im.
    -sam

  • 18 years ago

    by Malinda

    WOW!!!! that was awesome. i loved it. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Omg soooo sad and i can really relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by CrYiNrEdTeArS

    I loved it! i can realy relate to that...it was good..keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Staci

    Hey, that was really good. I liked it a lot. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Thas such a awesome poem, i loved it. Don't fear death though thas my only thought ... oh and feel instead of heel n thats it :D

    TTYL
    ...mia...
    aka
    Thorn ~Bleeding From Her Own Cuts~

  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    This made me cry out of all the poems I have read today especially the teddy bear part because I can relate, though I am a guy you wouldn't expect that stuff from a guy though not all guys are the same. This poem touched my heart, your an awesome writter.

    Thxs for commenting my poem, I always return the favor

    Tony :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    You are such a good writer, i love every bit of it. It was a really touching poem. Keep it up.

    thx 4 commenting on my poem and yes i agree with u, u should never give up

    Take care
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Lupa

    I like your poem, i found it hard to read but because of how it was bunched up like that but it's good
    ~Shadowed~

  • 18 years ago

    by hayley

    Very sad but yet a very good poem. excellent imagery. thanks for commenting on my poems. i appreciate it. oh i also read your profile. if you want to chat my email is italianbaby12@msn.com

    lots of love
    hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Vane

    That was very sad but indeed a great poem...thnx for the comment on my poem..KEEP IT UP

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    Great poem. the rhyme fits perfectly. the content is deep and emotional. great from beginning to end. few can write this way. it flows very very well. great job. keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emm

    It kept me going and clenching my fists ... it tells the reader what it would feel like if they ever did it ... wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Thats a really good poem and i find it so hard to believe that people can do that to themslelves!! if any of you reading this cut or think about committing suicide just remember that its not worth it and you should talk to someone! i am always willing to help anyone!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiombe aka Lady

    Damn!!!!!!!! dat was good gurl keep writin iight

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow, that is very touching! i love your stuff man.. that was really good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Aiimmee

    [x]-;;RealLY liKE tHE POem .. Keep Up THAH gUDd wRk!!__[x]