Yes that sound sad but I have see it happen to many time to too many of my friends...................And yes that is a true poem about me and JT he is my son my life my baby My savor he keeps me from dieing!!! |
by heather
This is really good. i liked it. good job |
Yes I do why may I ask! |
Hey i love your stuff. I have a yahoo im. |
by Malinda
WOW!!!! that was awesome. i loved it. Good job. |
Omg soooo sad and i can really relate. |
I loved it! i can realy relate to that...it was good..keep it up |
by Staci
Hey, that was really good. I liked it a lot. Keep it up. |
Thas such a awesome poem, i loved it. Don't fear death though thas my only thought ... oh and feel instead of heel n thats it :D |
by xxMagioxx
This made me cry out of all the poems I have read today especially the teddy bear part because I can relate, though I am a guy you wouldn't expect that stuff from a guy though not all guys are the same. This poem touched my heart, your an awesome writter. |
by Tormented
You are such a good writer, i love every bit of it. It was a really touching poem. Keep it up. |
by Little Lupa
I like your poem, i found it hard to read but because of how it was bunched up like that but it's good |
by hayley
Very sad but yet a very good poem. excellent imagery. thanks for commenting on my poems. i appreciate it. oh i also read your profile. if you want to chat my email is italianbaby12@msn.com |
by Vane
That was very sad but indeed a great poem...thnx for the comment on my poem..KEEP IT UP |
by stephyG
Great poem. the rhyme fits perfectly. the content is deep and emotional. great from beginning to end. few can write this way. it flows very very well. great job. keep writing! |
by Emm
It kept me going and clenching my fists ... it tells the reader what it would feel like if they ever did it ... wonderful poem |
by Stephanie
Thats a really good poem and i find it so hard to believe that people can do that to themslelves!! if any of you reading this cut or think about committing suicide just remember that its not worth it and you should talk to someone! i am always willing to help anyone!! |
Damn!!!!!!!! dat was good gurl keep writin iight |
by Sara
Wow, that is very touching! i love your stuff man.. that was really good... |
by Aiimmee
[x]-;;RealLY liKE tHE POem .. Keep Up THAH gUDd wRk!!__[x] |