by Emily May 5, 2006
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
What is the purpose |
That is really good.. cause im deaf myself .. wow.. just powerfully spoken well done 5/5 |
5/5. I loved how you wrote this poem! Im amazed! |
by MemoirsOfMe
Magnificent. This was truely, and brillantly, expressed. To the point where it goes, you did perfect on. The ending excerpt on the poem was really true, and made the poem made a powerful stance. It flowed so well. Probably because the syllables in each line, and the rhyming, which is always hard to match up to such an extent, but you succeeded in. Those were some powerful, and beautiful lines in there. I don't know what else to say, but this is one of the best poems I've read. For one to have so much flow, expression, and perfection in one single poem and also to have a strong meaning behind it is just what we need! Great. |
by natalie
Wow! great choice of words, i love the idea and theme of this poem. excellent 5/5 :) |
by herewithme
Absolutely brilliant! yay for you!! and its so true with everything now-a-days. |