Absolutely brilliant! yay for you!! and its so true with everything now-a-days.
i just cant get over how fantastic it is. love it. simple as that...

kat

Wow! great choice of words, i love the idea and theme of this poem. excellent 5/5 :)

Magnificent. This was truely, and brillantly, expressed. To the point where it goes, you did perfect on. The ending excerpt on the poem was really true, and made the poem made a powerful stance. It flowed so well. Probably because the syllables in each line, and the rhyming, which is always hard to match up to such an extent, but you succeeded in. Those were some powerful, and beautiful lines in there. I don't know what else to say, but this is one of the best poems I've read. For one to have so much flow, expression, and perfection in one single poem and also to have a strong meaning behind it is just what we need! Great.

5/5. I loved how you wrote this poem! Im amazed!

That is really good.. cause im deaf myself .. wow.. just powerfully spoken well done 5/5