by pseudo May 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I can't bare the look in your icy eyes. |
One-sided love is never very fun |
Amazing. every word you wrote brought a tear down my cheek as i remembered someone who made me feel exactly like this. the flow was great and filled with emotion. great job. keep writing. |
Great poem, it flowed very well and was amazingly well written! I throughly enjoyed it! |
by Jessica
WOW! this was aweesommee! this was just amazingg.. it flowed well, it had soo much emotion, and the words you used were great! this poem was brilliant! 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Wow this poem absolutely blew me away. This is so good! I'm just speechless. The rhythm, the flow, the emotions.. everything was just perfect. I absolutely loved this poem. Definitely one of my favorites. Great job on this. 5/5** |