I love your poetry Mike.
>>However....I think you might want to organize it a little better. You can still write free verse its just that you poetry isn't that short and it is easy to lose interest in a poem with no organization.

~~Retniapdoolb

P.S. I finished the book you let me borrow. I was very.......well.....interesting haha.
I liked the ending with the twist
but the sex scenes were a little weird.