Comments : Broken..

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Full of bitter facts that we taste in a life.....just loved it all the way...spl when u said

    Living the life alone is like clapping with one hand

    great write once again

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    The cruel realities we have to bear,
    but we can face them if some one is near.
    Who can hold the hand and walk across the thousands,
    lending the shoulder and the broken heart who mends.

    Its easy to scatter the broken heart,
    by just giving a painful thwart.
    The billions are there to break you, scatter you,
    but its tough to find one who assembles and mends it too...

    very well written my dear...i hate realitiy but i gess its life.
    5/5

    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    I don know wut to such words with powerful meanings and very true ones. you have amazed me

    love

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Heyy bharti,

    Such moving write , loved it.

    take care
    chavii.

    Thanks for ur sweet comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    An excellent piece.
    all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow that's so true ! Incredible, it's a fantastic write. I really enjoyed reading it. It's a real eye-opener.

    Loved it!

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-