Small person

by roisin   May 6, 2006


I'm one small person in a very big world
if i died no one would notice
if i lived it wouldn't be a big deal

I'm one small person in a very big world
its full of too many decisions that i cannot make
but even if i made the right choice
would anyone care?

I'm going to try and make something of myself
I'm going to try and make a difference
but no matter how hard i try no one will see
because,
I'm just a small person in a very big world

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  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    *eventually not ecentually.

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    This was an interesting poem. And I beg to differ even though I don't know you. Even though I think this way myself sometimes, I always see the truth ecentually. You are not just one small person, you are a very big person, and the world is smaller than you think.

    If you did die people would notice, and they would care.

    Anyways, poem wise this is an interesting poem.

    It has a nice flow, but I think at the ending it got a little weird...

    Anyways, keep up the good work.

    PS: I think the ending was a little weak and could use a bit of work, but this is still a good piece of work.

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