This was an interesting poem. And I beg to differ even though I don't know you. Even though I think this way myself sometimes, I always see the truth ecentually. You are not just one small person, you are a very big person, and the world is smaller than you think.

If you did die people would notice, and they would care.

Anyways, poem wise this is an interesting poem.

It has a nice flow, but I think at the ending it got a little weird...

Anyways, keep up the good work.

PS: I think the ending was a little weak and could use a bit of work, but this is still a good piece of work.

*eventually not ecentually.